devon7200's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Manhattan Project]

Great concept! Good gameplay. The only thing...

...as with many games is optimizing and fixing errors.

I noticed that the game would suffer lag during later intervals of the game. That makes me wonder if your properly removing objects and or their listeners for the garbage collector to get rid? And its not just a lag at the later levels as a result of increased foliage, because after I made it to the end, even during the terrible lag, the first level was still pretty slow when I went to play it again.

So I recommend checking to make sure all references are being destroyed.

If its not that it might be a problem on Newgrounds itself. Fun game nonetheless.

[The Kaleidoscope Project]

what????!

this is a game, i don't even understand whats going on, and i have the urdge to get as high as i can possible?!!? this is why you don't rush things. take your time working on it! nice colors, but no meat...

[Shodge]

hey!!! good attempt

i say good attempt because i see where the idea would've immersed from.
but didn't quite play as fast, sorta like 30 fps compared to 40. I wish it was more fast paced. I also believe that letting the cursor slide to the _xmouse and the _ymouse sorta added on to this dilemma. and the minor glitches like, the Mouse.Show was never used for returning to the main menu, and when i went to look at the instruction(after playing and dieing) my mouse was nowhere to be seen as well as the custom cursor u created. the music also was never stoped at the return to the menu. all being minor easy thing to fix(i'm guessing)
generally not my type of game, as i would expect the space invaders theme would be old now(only example that came to my thoughts).
also a idea, not that you need to take any of this advice, but perhaps having the cannon or turret being on the same field would make the multi-tasking more enjoyable. a decent game that i expect is more of a demo. but if you could take this and give it a story, and more fast paced action, a moving background(perhaps a space theme)and you got yourself a great game!!!

xdragonx10 responds:

Ahh, thanks for that bug, I didn't anticipate you going to the instructions after playing the game.

Not every game needs to be an extremely fast paced shooter (although my next game will be), as you can see there are many people here who've enjoyed this multitasking challenge.

[Replica Story 5(1/2)]

alot of shit.

in the beggining i can't tell if it's loading or not it just has the words " uhh lynn"
or something i forget i got so angry that i right clicked and hit "forward" in the context menu. by the way there is a compress button in flash.
goto file>save_and_compact. and most of it is cheap google images or whatever used. when i saw the riku and sora i knew this would be shit. and don't ask why i continued on. the story is really stupid. though every kingdom hearts follow ups are, this would be alot more compact if you used original work. and i naturally don't like these fighting styles alot of people use them because they can't make a good fighting system. i not going to judge you on the fighting system but you sorta of force us into the game with out ease i would of played more if i had a good tutorial of some sort. and i understand that this is the fifth one or so the title says. but still you can't assume that people understand the system.i was gonna give this 2/10 but ive seen worse.

LeoK responds:

Well then read the fuckiing title if it says kingdom hearts, then assume sora and riku are in this. So fuck off asshat!